Who's talking??

After learning about the "voice" in writing, we had done a little exercise we had in class. It's a simple instruction of lifting the lid of a lap-top computer, turning its power on, and opening Safari. Yet, we need to try using somebody else's voice to describe the process.

Guess who's voice am I using here:

We use computers as a learning tool at school, particularly Mac Book. The main reason of this is computers are lighter than books. You can have a whole lot of documents in your lap top and they don’t add any weight to it. Right now I am just going to focus on the way to open Mac Book’s browser, Safari. First, you need to lift its lid up. I personally think it’s very logical. Then, once again, this is pretty much logical; you turn on the power. In order to turn it on, all you have to do is to press that round button on the right hand side top corner. As you push it, you would begin to realize that it is an incredibly fast machine. When you have it on, you will see two things. The desk top and the dashboard located on the bottom of the screen. In the dashboard, I believe Safari is the forth one counting from your left, except if you have already moved things around on your dashboard. Safari has an icon of a compass, it shouldn’t be hard to find. If you can’t find it, the other way is to clock onto the magnifying glass icon on the right hand top corner of your screen. It should give you a little blue area says “spotlight”, once you clicked on it, with a bar that you can type in. You can find and open Safari just by typing Safari there.

Answer:   nekol. rM